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Japanese Dramatization 3

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                                  The Summer Nights

      In the summer nights, the fan blows over your face, feeling so cool.
The sheets almost off the bed as you move around in hard slumber, while
                        the crickets chirp outside your window.
     In the winter nights, the window fogs up. Small fluffs of white powder
silently drift upon the ground. Everyone is around the fireplace drinking
                                     warm soothing cocoa.
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Akemi-Ayura's avatar
I think this is the best dramatization verse you've posted yet. For some reason though the last line kinda tastes odd on the tongue after the subject matter of the previous sentences. It's kinda like a false climax/resolution. Otherwise, it's great. Thanks for sharing this. :boing: